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Dark Poetry #4

Birthday

Trickster112
Junior Member

since 2006-11-04

Posts 18
Chicago, Illinois, U.S

0 posted 2007-01-08 12:05 PM

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Today is my birthday
And nobody knows
I try and hide it on my face
But I know it shows
Some people ask me
What is wrong
Others want to know
What I'm writting,
I tell them...
Just a song

[This message has been edited by Nan (01-09-2007 08:06 AM).]

secret_truth_lies
Member

since 2006-11-14

Posts 74

1 posted 2007-01-09 04:52 PM

so iF today is your birthday... I just want to say Happy Birthday 1st. 2nd that's really good. I hope they do find out. Cuz Everybody wants to hear somebody else tell them Happy B-Day. So i hope you tell them or they find out. But good poem. I hope to see more from you soon.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2007-01-09 10:08 PM

Yes If it is HAPPY B-DAY if it isn't I liked this poem, I though it had a good flow very nice...
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

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