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Dark Poetry #4
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click1
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since 2003-03-25
Posts 152
usa
0 posted 2007-01-04 03:02 AM

Feel the liquid,
in your embrace.

A soft touch,
upon my face.

Follow the words,
to your private hell.

Knowing you,
will always dwell.

Upon the things,
you can not change.

Listen to,
your thoughts of rage.

I stumble on,
to keep up....

Not knowing when,
enough is enough!!

Click
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Kira Aso
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since 2006-09-26
Posts 351
Closer to Hell...
1 posted 2007-01-04 03:22 PM


This is totally going in my favs! It has a good flow.
Hpe to see more soon!!!

Luv Kira

hunnie_girl
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Posts 2567
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2 posted 2007-01-07 10:53 PM

again I feel the end is the strong point. I really liked this one
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~
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