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Case In Point

click1
Member

since 2003-03-25

Posts 152
usa

0 posted 2007-01-04 02:56 AM

I stand lookin',
in the mirror..

Who put me there?
no one dearer.

Have to face...
the all of me..

welcome to ...
what I see.

Face to face..
with all,
I hold dear.

But it's just me...
in the mirror.

Click

Kira Aso
Member

since 2006-09-26

Posts 351
Closer to Hell...

1 posted 2007-01-04 03:11 PM

I totally luved this! Pls keep writing so I can keep reading!

Luv Kira

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2007-01-07 10:49 PM

I'd have to agree with Kira, this was amazing

my favorite part was the ending.
~But it's just me...
in the mirror.~

Hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

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