Dark Poetry #4 |
Become Man? |
KuruShio Member
since 2003-11-18
Posts 110 |
Slam down the quill! Invoke the Muse's will! Question Life. Query death. Write me up An epitaph. Is this the Attrition of man? I'm gilded saint. I'm son of Sam. Give in! Sleep. Forget life. Weep! Rip out thy eyes and see Truth! Calculating wisdom, Youth. More over Aged. Wretched crone. Blighted sage! Stand Alone. Did He dream it I wonder? Did He Conjure? Did He BLUNDER! Out of ash Brine, and Sand Arise anew Become Man? Neither night nor day can give me purchase only purged dust on earth can avenge the worthless. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kuru, many fine writes I see evolving in each part here . . . a rebirth? Question Life. Query death. Write me up An epitaph. I adore this xxoo |
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KuruShio Member
since 2003-11-18
Posts 110 |
Just a bit of rambling really. Most of my stuff has to do with the rebirth of the world after a nuclear war and my rebirth after that war. again thanks for the post |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Ash, brine, and sand. Interesting formula for resurrection.... a most prophetic piece. I liked it much. coyote 8) |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Brilliantly penned |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
I love this =) great job Kuru. - River Love hurts as bad as it feels good. |
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