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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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turn the lights low please my sight has been attuned to the night wash rainfall fresh walk of haven . . . The deepened scars glint within the moonlight I stare at them and laugh half-heartedly of course There are no cotton comforts or cool jeweled pools of late to create a sanctuary of sorts from myself you see It is not this dying world of which I find fear but this damp, black death I have lain across my face I am left to gaze only upon a trace of me beneath this veil of mourning |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Your work has grown so much and so quickly my sista. I truly love the form of this--you just went in there and truly touched base with yourself and produced an honest expression without any of the bells and whistles. And guess what? When ya can do that? You don't need the razzmatazz. Hugs you. I love the direction your writing is taking.  |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"There are no cotton comforts or cool jeweled pools of late to create a sanctuary of sorts from myself you see" Oh my...Sue...do you have ANY idea how deeply this hit me? Of course you do...smile. The honesty of this is beautiful... Thank you...for YOU... When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace. -Jimi Hendrix [This message has been edited by vlraynes (09-27-2003 04:11 PM).] |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
But? Why? You are one of the sweetest people I have ever met. Don't answer. That's just me thinking out loud, but I have to ask myself why. You have been kind to me. Seems so unfair, and undeserving. I say don't answer because that's not something I'm sure you would want to talk about in a not so private place, but I just hate to see this. If it's not about you personally then this is sad for anyone who is going through this. I pray they get better soon. SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
oh sue, so beautiful... "The deepened scars glint within the moonlight I stare at them and laugh half-heartedly of course" i wish i had the talent that you do "For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible." |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"It is not this dying world of which I find fear but this damp, black death I have lain across my face" Truly... Susan |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
"I am left to gaze only upon a trace of me beneath this veil of mourning" Mourn not for traces, seen, but for faces, unseen. I enjoyed reading. coyote 8) "Who knows if to live is to be dead, and to be dead, to live? And we really, it may be, are dead; in fact I once heard sages say that we are now dead, [This message has been edited by coyote (09-30-2003 10:08 PM).] |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Wow, Sue... I enjoyed this, deeply. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
 I needed this. you are amazing And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Littlewing I have just answered this but must have pressed the wrong button and lost it. The images you portay are so tragic that I going to think it is about someone else. Hugs, Maggie |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome!! |
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