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teenpoet
Member

since 2001-10-17

Posts 280
Michigan

0 posted 2003-09-22 10:30 AM

she gave up on me
I gave up on me
they gave up on me
oh my dear guardian angels
where are you now
I know I don't understand much
but please don't give up on me
I try to do as you tell me
and i try to listen well
but what you say makes
no sense to me
go look close far
earth
what do you want me to see
what am I missing
please help me
I'm so unhappy
my emotions so mixed
turmoil reigns supreme
I'm more than slightly lost
please
don't give up on me
Wow i'm the first to post in this forum.

Let go of your concept of reality and try mine for a while...then we'll see how long you last.

[This message has been edited by teenpoet (09-22-2003 10:31 AM).]

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

1 posted 2003-09-22 11:14 AM

Full of yearning to be understood. Very hurtful place to be.
Shara~

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2003-09-22 02:45 PM

ahahah Alicia had to laugh at your last line there . . .

here ya go:

they are always there, trust me on this
nice writing
xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (09-22-2003 02:46 PM).]

Mor-Estal Landis
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since 2003-09-03

Posts 10
Luca, Ventoren

3 posted 2003-09-22 07:50 PM

Awesome BP, awesome. And since you cant tell them I might as well.

Alicia has given up writing now, and drawing and talking for that matter. I've done what I could but this may be the last of her work that we ever read.

Mor-Estal Landis, The Dark Star
"...Shadowed by Darkness, and Stalked by Despair..."

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2003-09-23 07:19 AM

email on the way Estal . . .

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

5 posted 2003-09-24 02:16 AM

Sometimes I just go "silent" too.

(okay, okay, it seldom lasts long, but I DO.

)

And the thing we forget about with angels, and that they need our permission to intervene--this is the first step.

Expect miracles now.

(You've already got the first one, being the first to post in a brand new forum.

)

and hey, I know you don't know me, but give yourself a little break now and then--k?

blackhalo
Member

since 2000-02-15

Posts 467
Denver, CO

6 posted 2003-09-24 02:35 AM

I LOVED this piece! It was shocking... Very profound... *add*

And I'll get an e-mail on the way as well.

~Alicia

teenpoet
Member

since 2001-10-17

Posts 280
Michigan

7 posted 2003-09-24 09:18 AM

I am now speaking again and as far as Estal and Sara are concerned I'm writing ad drawing and singing again too. Thanks all for your concern I appreciate it but I thinK I need to figure this one out still. I feel...I don't know but something's wrong with me and before I can start writing and all that again I have to figure this out.

Let go of your concept of reality and try mine for a while...then we'll see how long you last.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

8 posted 2003-09-24 11:10 AM

Alicia, excellent and please
know you are FAR from alone
with your feelings . . .
there are many, if not most
who relate
Do not be afraid to reach
for one of many hands outstretched
xxoo

Tourniquet
Junior Member

since 2003-09-18

Posts 13

9 posted 2003-10-01 04:39 PM

Life is a process of questioning. Ourselves, others, nature, Faith.. so many factors can complicate what is so simple in its basic form. At times we can feel lost, but really we are still found, and the feeling of confusion is just part of the journey.
Embrace whatever it is you are feeling, even if you don't understand it now.. and discover that it is a completely natural experience. If it weren't, then you wouldn't be equipped to do so

Most importantly, never stop questioning

Peace.

teenpoet
Member

since 2001-10-17

Posts 280
Michigan

10 posted 2004-03-16 07:42 AM

And yet sometimes that questioning can ruin and destroy and maim so many things that you once valued so highly you never thought it could be destroyed with a simple question. That's what I have recently discovered.

When you twist around to see the past you're missing your chance to glimpse the future.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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11 posted 2004-05-17 04:14 AM

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