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Dark Poetry #4

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carolinabeen
Member

since 2006-12-12

Posts 69

0 posted 2006-12-19 05:42 AM

no chance he has with her
all he sees is her
every all is her

taste is different
what
she is
he would give
he is she would
give

it's all he can try
it's all she can pray
for

if never he'd never
if ever she'd be

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2006-12-19 06:38 PM

your poetry has an interesting form to it...

leaves alot between the lines to think about~~
I forgot to welcome you~~

Russell8624
Member

since 2006-11-28

Posts 99
Minnesota

2 posted 2006-12-21 02:13 AM

...I want the thirty seconds it took me to read that back.

rockbabe
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 105

3 posted 2006-12-21 05:05 AM

Needs work???!

Please
R

Darken Rahl
New Member

since 2006-12-22

Posts 1
i stay in cape town... if you don't know then get a map

4 posted 2006-12-22 09:28 PM

Hey.
Wow it's rather different but I like it... Very vague but it makes it more interesting.
Nice work.

D.

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