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LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

0 posted 2005-05-18 09:27 AM

holding fiery autumn leaves to my breast
it is then, one last farewell becomes, darkest
crushed beneath burial mounds
of twilight hours
drinking in life’s ruin
freefalling
into what will come
the downhill surge of time
down,
down,
down,
into hunger’s democracy
where life moves so slowly..
painting the old child
with the new one
the one i don’t know
the one who keeps moving
while i write…
flashing signs blind my eyes
noise hurts my ears
intuition is all that rears me
bending roads
and what lies beneath
thoughts become monsters
truth is feeling moving forward
led by example
experience
curveballs
complicated rivers
which ache to drown me
arms never answer
calls of the gulls
over an ocean i can’t seem to find
yet its dark, and deeper then i remember
ode to metamorphosis
standing alone with a mockingbird
and madness
dreams going past
laughing at the real me
into the then of where I am
today is yesterdays leftover shadow
of us
of
of
darkness
slithering
down
my soul
I'm lost
lost and
falling to my knees
a tear
falls from
the soul
of who
we
were

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

1 posted 2005-05-20 12:30 PM

This, wow, its beautiful. But what if those falling tears were caught in a jar by an angel and saved to show you the love that will forever cling to you and you can look at those tears of pain and loose new ones to bliss and happiness. Just a thought.

-GIS

...and the way things are goin, they're gonna crucify me. -The Beattles

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

2 posted 2005-05-22 09:17 PM

I am
today is yesterdays leftover shadow
of us
of
of
darkness
slithering
down
my soul
I'm lost
lost and
falling to my knees
a tear
falls from
the soul
of who
we
were
--------
awwww Lee

I so know this.....be well you....

I came from the mountain
The crust of creation
My whole situtaion-made from clay to stone

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2005-05-22 10:59 PM

LeeJ

Sometimes you got to know, that everything will be alright!

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

4 posted 2005-05-24 07:04 AM

Wow...I Like this, It has different meanings, depending on how u feel, Awesome Write...

"Trina"

Laughter Is The Enemy Of Desire, But Desire Itself Is Painful, After You Get That Which You Desire, What's Next?

twinkyfl1
Member

since 2006-12-15

Posts 133
florida

5 posted 2006-12-22 12:36 PM

After a 50 year old relationship, these last few words of yours cut to the core of my being.

a tear
falls from
the soul
of who
we
were

At 12 years old it was love at first sight for me, and although we are still legally together, for all intents and purposes it's over.

It's the tragedy of my life.

To thy own self be true

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