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Dark Poetry #4

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ozlem
Junior Member

since 2006-10-06

Posts 16

0 posted 2006-12-02 03:29 PM

This pain is gnawing me
Poignant feeling so hard to bear
It got me deeply
Have i deserved it that much?

Crying, crying, and crying
No more tears left
I felt salty like oceans
Which is burning me, and people around

I caught up in fluctuation, up and down
Coming and going, such a tide
I smashed to smithereens
Will i ever get over?

It shouldn't be a big deal
But this time, it is different
Such a damage, i can't get rid of
One day, will be remembered with a bitter smile

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2006-12-04 12:03 PM

Such a damage, i can't get rid of
One day, will be remembered with a bitter smile~
...very nice ending i liked this it had strong words, and that depth i love in poems... hope to read more soon...
hunnie

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

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