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Why... Just Why
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Why... Just Why |
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Abbeon Member
since 2006-11-30
Posts 228Curiousity, and wonder |
Why? Why must we have to face are fears? Why can't we just hide? why? Why do we have to be strong? Why cant we just dissolve into the shadows and flee? why? Why cant we just not speak? Why do we have to face the truth when all we want to do is lie? Why? Why cant we just cry until the world is healed? Why do we have to face the pain? Why? Why cant we heal within a moments thought? Why do we have to face the world calm, well are soul tears apart? Why, why because we choose to live, and life can be cruel, yet to live means so much more, still i pause and wonder... Why? Abbeon |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
very nice ending... ~Why, why because we choose to live, and life can be cruel, yet to live means so much more, still i pause and wonder...~ although i thought there were way to many whys in it, it was kinda to questiony(okaie my made up word) but it would have a much better flow if you just kept each sentence begining with why instead of that extra line... but hey, that just my opinion  hunnie  A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~ |
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secret_truth_lies Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 74 |
yep I have to agree. Life is cruel, but at the end It's gonna be great. You just have to hope for the best and put hell to rest. |
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