Dark Poetry #4 |
Concrete rose |
Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
Concrete rose: To you I still remain unseen Silently hidden in shadow Your eyes never linger long enough to catch a glimpse Yet I am still here; beautiful You pass by me everyday, Yet never take the time to look Only if you would stop; you’d surely be amazed Long years I have spent here, Struggling to survive My determination strong, My will unwavering; I will make it Hopelessness I won’t allow to touch me, Nor depression takes its hold Nothing can make me give up; I’ll never fold For I’m the rarest piece of creation A winner of the odds, I can’t be broken Not by mortal or GOD. Fore I’m the rose that grew from concrete and I shall prevail. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Tupac has a poem called Concrete Rose or something similar. Good write. Yes, I do remember you. E-mail me to let me know about where did you have your book published. I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality. |
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Lil OnE Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234Pasco County. Fl. |
Will you allow me, just for a brief moment, to pretend that I share the same strength? Inspiring... and for me a bit haunting if I may say... your words are still echoing in my mind. In short, I really liked this one! No man is EVER worth my tears... and the only one who is will never make me cry. |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
I really liked how you were talking about a rose growing in concrete...It was very nicely done. So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart. |
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littlefairy Member
since 2007-08-06
Posts 51New York |
i loved it very beautiful. I personally adore the way roses appear and when i imagine one actually forming from concrete i think it'd be a amazing sight. Good job. -Tara |
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