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trUstNooNe
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since 2006-05-21
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0 posted 2006-11-20 09:12 AM



Blood rushing, words flowing aimlessly with out any other purpose but to cause affliction to what we want to be the perfect relationship. We argue, We scream, We plead with each other to never leave. It shouldn't be like this, It cant possiably be this hard. We strive for perfection, there is no other option, I'll die to make this word. Your the one i want to be with, Your the one who makes me whole. This cant be as far as we can go. If we both truely want this to work, we have to give it all we have. Dedication and Commmitment are key ingredents. Not all problems will cease, but they will become less and less frequent. We just have to Keep on giving it all we ever had.

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