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Dark Poetry #4

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JenniferMaxwell

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since 2006-09-14

Posts 2423

0 posted 2008-02-09 05:42 PM

unbeknownst
to the assemblage,
a post menopausal nothing-better-to-do,
shuffles through the archives
in the library of youth
looking to find among random posies
some evidence to condemn
another god given soul
for their winged adventure
in verse or prose.

she's peacocked in feathers of prideful arrogance
disguising a morbid and pietistic vengeance,
freudianed in glasses with cataract lenses,
trying to pin a conviction on a rambling muser.

bang goes the gavel!
judgment is rendered!
god shouts "but that is not mine!"
as down comes the blade
dulled by crone's sputterings
of nonsensical perceptions.

[This message has been edited by JenniferMaxwell (02-09-2008 09:24 PM).]

Sir_Vampire
Member

since 2007-06-12

Posts 96
Johannesburg

1 posted 2008-02-11 03:58 AM

Loved it, good write Jennifer, this put a little smile on my face which few things rarely do, once again well done, i look forward to seeing more

you watched me bleed you watched me die you watched me not even a bat of your eye

JenniferMaxwell

Member Elite

since 2006-09-14

Posts 2423

2 posted 2008-02-12 05:51 AM

How sweet of you to leave such a lovely comment, Sir_Vampire. Thank you!

Fareed
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since 2008-02-08

Posts 75

3 posted 2008-02-12 07:10 AM

Oh this one is equally amazing.

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