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SilhouetteMarquis
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0 posted 2008-02-09 05:25 PM



Glimmering in hallowed halls
Stands silent candles, swaying forth
By winds of terror, winds of silence
Winds of frigid origins, north
This hard-lined spell from far beyond
What mortal minds may urge to grasp
Pure evil is this stabbing breath
As we take our final gasp.

This plague is, sadly, kept repeating
their murmured hearts, a solemn beating
These aware and constant thoughts depleting
For what could be at stake?
Welcoming and greeting
2 paths en route a' meeting
A certainty of death for those awake.
But as souls can be uncertain,
and close the final curtain,
Embracing at the coming of the gates

A noose, a slit above the chest
A gunshot wound, the second best
to cyanide, for instant rest
Diffusion of this so-called savior's bane.
When those in doubt shall take it's test
A fate to feel, dammed or blessed.
A dormant soul, for one to wrest
The flesh now soaked with sorrowed, somber rain

But for those in fitful slumber still
A lack of light at the windowsill
Emotions beat at forceful will
Witnessing of life gone nil
Induce the sudden urge to cause this unencumbered pain
and the emptiness, not one to fill
the end result, a scream so shrill
a cause for these unspoken words,
the lonesome feeling's reign.
No need for them to try,
For life is like a box of chocolates
with a diabetic death o'er a lie

Ignorance comes too late for some,
By daunted bliss or empty sorrow
Inglory of this fate they seek
But all of those we have to borrow
Intrusive words to silent beings
Comatose, without their wings
Never said, to those who speak,
Will surely kill tomorrow.

And these withheld emotions act as guns
with the safeties never on.
Extruding bullets pierce this heart
But these words are never gone.
Shards of lead can be removed
But words, forever here.
Bleedings how the body cleans,
But this soul is never clear

A mess, two sounds, rampaging crowds
As the heart's arrested beating
Witnesses to this attest
Stand at the two paths meeting
To choose the right
With the controversy's heating
To better life for themselves...
their families...
and true love's royal seating
(Only greed, as sums and debts impeding)
But as of one who deepens,
as of one that dwells
They will surely find themselves
At the greeting
or the damning
of the gates.


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