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KatKali
Member

since 2008-01-03

Posts 67
Where the wispers grow louder

0 posted 2008-01-26 06:21 PM

Black Words,
Tainted Black words spill from my lips,
Little lies I can’t stop saying,

Tainted lies,
I say things I don’t mean,
I say things that’s not the truth,
I need to kill these words but I can’t,
I don’t know why but I can’t,

Black words,
I make black words with my hips,
I lie with my body, and I’ve stopped caring,

Tainted lies,
I do things I don’t like,
I do things that tells people I’m not like you, when I really am,
This needs to stop but I can’t,
I can’t stop it I can’t,

I’m addicted to this life,
I love it, but should stop,
The drug of it is so tasteful,
Stop, Stop, Stop, My mind yells,
I can’t, I’m addicted now, there's no way out, nor do I want out.

Dark,
What does that mean?
Light,
What makes you so good?
Sin,
What is my Sin?
Only when you answer the first two will
you find the last.

KatKali
Member

since 2008-01-03

Posts 67
Where the wispers grow louder

1 posted 2008-01-26 06:24 PM

This is so truthful for me, I praticly live a lie, but I'm so into it, If I tried to get out, My life would go to hell,
Its the most truthful out of any of my poems, Sad really.

Dark,
What does that mean?
Light,
What makes you so good?
Sin,
What is my Sin?
Only when you answer the first two will
you find the last.

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

2 posted 2008-01-31 05:13 PM

interesting, I think I know what you're talking about. It's a little confusing to me but I'm not very smart so.... It's like you can't seem to let go when u want to and at the same time u dont want to.

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

Abbeon
Member

since 2006-11-30

Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder

3 posted 2008-02-02 01:56 PM

In response to the poems subject:

We weave a lie around are self so i wonder what are you trying to hide? The truth is never so ugly as a lie that has shaped its self around are life. From words that are tainted new things can grow all you have to do is let them.

In response to the poem:

Well written i enjoyed your work, you write well and can only improve.

Abbeon.

The hollow emptiness, the crazed thoughts left to survive

Fareed
Member

since 2008-02-08

Posts 75

4 posted 2008-02-09 12:18 PM

I don't know why but somehow it was reminiscent of 'Mad Girl's Love Song' by Sylvia Plath.

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