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Mr. Omniscient
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0 posted 2006-11-10 10:48 PM


Retaliation

Do you know who I am?
Do you know me…?
No… So why do you mess with me to the degree where even The Devil himself didn’t want to see this side of me,
Why try and talk it down raising the difficulty?
I guarantee your friends will flee,
Drop the faculty because it’s just you and me…
Ha, ha, ha
Yes, I agree…
Oh! The humanity!

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1 posted 2006-11-14 12:35 PM


i liked the beggining not so much the ending though...
hunnie

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace   ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

secret_truth_lies
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2 posted 2006-11-14 10:08 PM


I really liked this poem, it really describes me alot. I can't really see why Hunnie doesn't like the ending, but I guess that's her opinion. I thought it was really good. Alot of sarcasim. ( How ever you spell it.) I hope to see more
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