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Mr. Omniscient
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since 2006-10-28
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0 posted 2006-11-10 10:16 PM


Friends I have

I have those kinds of friends,
Negatives are all they send,
My “friends” pass it off as if they don’t offend.
Act as if they have time to lend,
But in reality they have your mind to bend.

Yeah… These are my friends.


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Guthwulf
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since 2006-11-10
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1 posted 2006-11-10 10:25 PM


Hahahaha.  I dunno why for sure but i loved this.  Maybe it's the last line.  Like you just give up and go "yep *sigh* thems mah friends..."

Kinda like when you bring a new friend around to your house and you hav a weird family.  You just have to accept it sometimes. lol.

Loved it.

We admire people for their talents,
We love them for their flaws.

hunnie_girl
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2 posted 2006-11-14 12:07 PM


ha been there have those friends:P you have to accept them athough sending negatives hmmm well that was my fav line.. negatives are all they send liked this...
hunnie

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace   ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

secret_truth_lies
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since 2006-11-14
Posts 74

3 posted 2006-11-15 07:02 AM


LOL, man I have those friends also. YOu did a good job on this. I hope to see more from you.
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