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SATURN
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0 posted 2006-11-09 09:24 PM


Your Eyes

I see you standing in the dark void of night as you stare into my eyes i see there what you dare not speak in words. you are trapped by your fears you think only the worst will happen you see only rejection. Say your mind and be free or be trapped forever wondering what if. let you voice state what your eyes show. Look deep into my eyes and tell me what you feel.

Hali
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SATURN

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secret_truth_lies
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since 2006-11-14
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1 posted 2006-11-24 10:40 AM


Hey I thought this was really good. I hope to see more from you soon. thanks for sharing with us.
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