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Dark Poetry #4
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ozlem
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since 2006-10-06
Posts 16
0 posted 2006-11-03 08:11 PM

The sky is blue
Suddenly, turns out flue
That made me felt blue
I don't have a clue

Sun smiles between clouds with rainbow
Beauty of colors faded away my sorrow
Release my happiness you borrow
Song of the birds follow
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secret_truth_lies
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since 2006-11-14
Posts 74
1 posted 2006-11-24 10:33 AM

hmmm... I don't know if I like this one or not. I thought you were just trying to make it rhyme or something. I don't know if it's me or not. But I hope to see more from you soon. Thanks for sharing with us.
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