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hunnie_girl
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0 posted 2006-11-07 12:18 PM



anywhere but here is where i'd like to be,
i wish all the pain and hurt would leave my body,

i don't know what ties me to this home,
other than the fact it's the only one i've known,

lately i've been feeling i don't  fit in,
and i'm left searching down a road i've never been,

maybe it's to late to do what i thought i'd never do,
but now i feel more than ever, i don't want to stay with you,

my thoughts might change with each passing day,
but right now i don't really want to stay,

we'll see tomorrow as the morning draws near,
who knows, maybe i just need some time away from here,

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace   ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

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Trickster112
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1 posted 2006-11-07 12:25 PM


i like this poem, it kinda is what is going on in my life right now. keep up the good work
Kira Aso
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2 posted 2006-11-07 09:30 AM



I like this poem too hunnie.
(I'm there too)
But I find it hard to move on since the one thought in my mind is "where would I go?"

Maybe that's a bit cowardly or the only excuse left I can find.

Another well written poem!
Hugs and Hershey bars for hunnie!!!

Walter Poe
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3 posted 2006-11-09 07:17 AM


In the end we are all alone
We are born alone
We die alone
All others around us are a myth
A subtle belief
To keep us sane

No one can hurt you
Not deep down

Because they do not exist
The are just a figment of reality
To keep your mind from cracking

Look in the back of your mind
Look at all the people you have known

How many just fall off the map
Just cease to exist once you have left the room

You can do this with pain to.

I have an exercise i used to do once when i thought my heart was broken.

The human mind can only think of so many things at anyone time. Any time you feel sad picture something a tree, a car anything, once you have that image in your mind add another and another and another and keep going until you have filled your head with images.

Then you will have a hard time remembering even what you were trying to forget.

So won't you sing me a rainbow Josie roll me a song
Just tonight make it right 'cause it's been wrong for oh so long
There's lots of shades of darkn

hunnie_girl
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4 posted 2006-11-09 11:39 PM


wow thanks guys... yea always the question where to go.. i guess anywhere but where you are now, but no one wants to be alone and it's not always easy to do things alone, i guess time is all you really have to hold on to the future with, if that makes any sense...
hunnie

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace   ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

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