Dark Poetry #4 |
just a fake. |
Aeris Nicole Junior Member
since 2003-08-18
Posts 21 |
you said you'd NEVER be him who was i to know??? you said you'd never leave me ...you were the first to go. i'm dying on the inside outside i'm *just a fake* i smile. i laugh. i hide away, the part of me i hate. i'm living for the moment just to know i'm real i always close my eyes to make the memories disappear i said i'd NEVER be her i never let you down i said i'd never leave you and i'd always be around but nothing ever matters when love is *just a fake* cause the tables turn around and love turns into hate. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
wow that was amazing i really liked this i haven't read anything from you until now so WELCOME TO PIP i hope to read more soon... hunnie A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~ |
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Guthwulf New Member
since 2006-11-10
Posts 7New Zealand |
Definately a good poem. It could do with a little tidying here and there (punctuation and form etc) but then i am a perfectionist so dont mind me lol. It reminds me a lot of a poem i started a while ago and never finished. Well said, well said. I look forward to more from you =) |
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cherrys_rule Member
since 2006-03-18
Posts 442 |
Man this was incredible. Plus I can really relate to this. Towards all my relationships. I really hope to see more out of ya. Thanks for sharing with us. |
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