Dark Poetry #4 |
The Attack (Need feedback) |
Mr. Omniscient Member
since 2006-10-28
Posts 134 |
The Attack Leaving this school immediately is my recommendation… You must be part of an alien invasion because You being here is no compensation... All you send is much humiliation. Can’t you see the dispensations, You’re the cause of everyone’s negative sensation. And “No…” these aren’t false imputations or allegations, We need an alleviation of you… This is your profession; it’s just what you do. How many schools have you conquered and ruined…? Three? Two? Do you have a list you follow with your crew? I’m sorry but I have to put an end to your queue. [This message has been edited by Mr. Omniscient (11-01-2006 05:17 PM).] |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
very gripping, good... i'm not sure i understood who you were talking to though... but it was good anyway. hunnie A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~ |
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Mr. Omniscient Member
since 2006-10-28
Posts 134 |
Nobody in particular. |
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