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Dark Poetry #4

Fearing With Agony

zigwield
Member

since 2006-06-25

Posts 61

0 posted 2006-10-28 06:39 PM

It is never ending
no angels singing
lost
all of them
because of the darkness
some have been consumed
some still try to survive
the hammer as it fell
on the dead faces
and the blood flowed
endlessly
i forget whatever
i thought i would have known
to this i say
horror enters
my eyes full of fears
of untold memories
with evil seductions
and i cannot help myself
not breathing with dispair
cause it will not leave me
once again
i need to hide
under the warmness of my blanket

[This message has been edited by zigwield (10-29-2006 11:54 AM).]

cherrys_rule
Member

since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

1 posted 2006-10-29 07:28 AM

I actually like this one. But I would go back and fix the last word "blunket" to blanket, unless it's supposed to be like that. But thanks for sharing with us. You did an awesome job on this.

zigwield
Member

since 2006-06-25

Posts 61

2 posted 2006-10-29 11:55 AM

Fixed!

Thanks!

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