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zigwield
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since 2006-06-25
Posts 61


0 posted 2006-10-16 01:10 PM



i really miss her
every day
and it is like
a crazy slam
has passed through
my thoughts

we have not spoken for
many days (many months)
i really miss her
she has been close friend
she is about to arive
in these days

every night i think of her
and all day
i want to be with her

  
  

it is these moments
that a person can feel
empty and vacant

i know that i am
just a very small
and little boy
that has only now
start to love
but it is difficult
to live without her
being with me
and i being
with her
and both be together
and we can
love each other
and at nights
in the mornings
we will take breakfast
together
just like the shower
and the restaurants
to eat all the shop's food
and the desert
and then at house
watch movies together
and many other things
that lovers do.

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cherrys_rule
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since 2006-03-18
Posts 442

1 posted 2006-10-17 09:43 AM


that's very sweet, but it's not really a poem at all. It's mostly just your thoughts. But i like that alot. Thanks for sharing with us. I hope to see more of your work.
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