Dark Poetry #4 |
Dark days |
hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
i'm here to share, my confession, the hell of this dark depression, you wait for, the time to go, when it's not as easy to see your scars show, it's not something to face, all alone, but you just can't seem, to find home, if and when you make it through, you pray for a better life, to hold onto. A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~ |
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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
This is a very moving write hunnie. (I can relate again to one of you're poems) You have such a great way of expressing yourself girl! i'm here to share, my confession, the hell of this dark depression, It sounds hopeless and sad in a way... Love and Hershey bars coming you're way hunnie! (Don't feel down!) ~Kira |
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Khatharsis Junior Member
since 2006-05-21
Posts 42 |
short but sweet. I enjoyed this! The descriptions were very vague and really let you in on what you were feeling. Niiiice! P.S. Can ya peep "Your Hand in Mind" whenever ya get the chance. Thnaks a Mill. |
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pip_man Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 70Canada |
Great write! I have to say this is probably one of my favourites by you. Hope to see more. "When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace." |
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cherrys_rule Member
since 2006-03-18
Posts 442 |
I really like this poem Hunnie. You did an awsome job on this. I can really relate to this poem. I like it when I can relate to the poems I'm reading. I hope to see more from you in the future. Thanks for sharing. Courtney |
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