Playin games with my mind...

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Dark Poetry #4

Playin games with my mind...

cherrys_rule
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since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

0 posted 2006-10-10 06:45 PM

I'm done playing these games.
Man, I really liked you, I thought you liked me too.
But obviously my fantasy dreams aren't coming true.
You say you have a "girlfriend?"
but there's one thing I can't comprehend...
you and your girlfriend, hmmm... sounds kindda fishy...
It's funny since no one knows who she is.
Why would you lie like this?
Then you go flirt with me everyday.
man, you must be a playa, that's all I gotta say.
But all I really have to say is good-bye, plus you weren't even worth my time.

Dedicated to the guy i used to like...

Kira Aso
Member

since 2006-09-26

Posts 351
Closer to Hell...

1 posted 2006-10-12 10:12 AM

Sounds like this guys got problems...
Seriously, great job!
One of my friends had a guy that did the same thing to her. Maybe he just didn't want to be committed? *shrugs*

Anywho, nice job.

Hugs and Hershey bars!

~Kira

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2006-10-12 11:28 AM

i thought this was nicely written although in some parts it might be better breaking some parts of the lines up. i don't know thats just what i think...
hunnie*

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

cherrys_rule
Member

since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

3 posted 2006-10-22 06:38 PM

thanks you guys. i thought this poem could have been better too. But I was really upset with this guy, so I just wrote what ever came out. Thankfully, it came out that you guys can understand. But thank you for replying to this poem.

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