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ozlem
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since 2006-10-06
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0 posted 2006-10-08 04:39 PM


I don't want to be loved anymore
Such a pain, makes it worse, nothing more
I don't want to be the one you adore
Hope time will restore

[This message has been edited by ozlem (10-08-2006 07:07 PM).]

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cherrys_rule
Member
since 2006-03-18
Posts 442

1 posted 2006-10-08 09:09 PM


awww, that's really sad. Good job though. I hope to see more from you in the future.
Thanks for sharing.

Kira Aso
Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351
Closer to Hell...
2 posted 2006-10-09 12:30 PM


I truly enjoyed this!

It was something I could relate to.

Happy to see more of you're work coming out!

Lots of luck and love!

~Kira

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