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Dark Poetry #4

Point of No Return

rockbabe
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 105

0 posted 2006-10-05 04:34 AM

The feel of your arms around my body
The feel of my head upon your chest,
The feel of my hand in yours,
The feel of your breath upon my face

The feel of safety,
The feel of happiness,
The feel of contentment
The feel of satisfaction,

My eyes intwined within yours,
At last... the first kiss,
Led by a warm embrace.

Not wanting to let go.

Our opposite departure seems so final
The gentle look in your eyes
As we glanced from the distance between us.

I can still feel your breath on my face,
I can still feel your arms around me,
I can still feel our first kiss,
I can still see your face in my thoughts,

Why...

Why did it have to End?

[This message has been edited by rockbabe (10-05-2006 05:07 AM).]

lanaia74
Member

since 2006-08-25

Posts 67

1 posted 2006-10-05 06:58 AM

So beautiful, so sad, but VERY well done!

Kira Aso
Member

since 2006-09-26

Posts 351
Closer to Hell...

2 posted 2006-10-05 09:26 AM

This was heartbreaking...

You did a wonderful job of bringing out the feelings. Lovely job!

~Kira

rockbabe
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 105

3 posted 2006-10-09 09:08 AM

Thank you for your comments and taking the time to read.

R

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