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Dark Poetry #4

To A Love Never Lost

UseTheIllusion
Member

since 2006-02-06

Posts 223
In a state of limbo

0 posted 2006-10-05 08:00 PM

Time freezes for a moment,
As I catch sight of your face.
Hemmingway wrote of the world in spin,
But that never happened for me.

Instead I am in a state of perpetuity,
A never-ending dream state fantasy.
At the loss of all my schemes, I scream,
And the sight of you catches my fancy.

You end the constant in my equation.
As I hear your steps, the world quakes.
You are the softness to my abrasion,
And yet, a potential victim of my mistakes.

How can I talk to you when I have nothing to say?
How can I explain to you how I cry every day?
How can you understand my state of mind?
What heart do I have to give, how could you reply?

cherrys_rule
Member

since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

1 posted 2006-10-09 06:09 PM

I really enjoyed reading this I hope to see more from you in the future. Thanks for sharing.

TwiztidKarma
Junior Member

since 2006-09-22

Posts 43
Florida

2 posted 2006-10-09 07:56 PM

True, True

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2006-10-12 11:36 AM

You end the constant in my equation.
As I hear your steps, the world quakes.
You are the softness to my abrasion,
And yet, a potential victim of my mistakes

my fav. stanza i realy liked this good write...
hunnie*

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

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