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Dark Poetry #4

A Shot Taken

TwiztidKarma
Junior Member

since 2006-09-22

Posts 43
Florida

0 posted 2006-10-04 06:31 PM

   Let me think about it,
   It's time to go out, A fight!
   It's night,
   It's  Tight,
             Im geared

       But with my mind being unclear,
     Thinkin all about her,
    Where do I go?
    What do I do?
   What do I say?
    The thought looping in my own terrain,
  But what do I always gain,
   All that is pain,

  The night sky is nice,
  And Mother Moon so beautiful,
The stars borrowed me,
  And threw me into oblivion,

Oh , no , not again,
           Nothing to hear, I go deaf

Hate and Love,
The things I cannot,
Feel free to torment me, And go rot,
Cuz all that Ive sought,
   Did it really matter?
        They said,
          "It did not"

     And in the backround of my tainted steps,
       Wispered words that could be heard,

           "Bruised he lays,
             He cannot feel,
           Heart wayed down like a ton of steel,
   But just maybe one day she shall come to feel,
      And try to raise his ton of steel."

cherrys_rule
Member

since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

1 posted 2006-10-04 08:10 PM

AWSOME!!! Once again you amaze me.
Thanks for sharing, I hope to see more from you in the future.
Courtney

Kira Aso
Member

since 2006-09-26

Posts 351
Closer to Hell...

2 posted 2006-10-05 09:39 AM

Yes, this is very awesome!
Great work!

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