Dark Poetry #4 |
Making Memories |
Moonkist Member
since 2006-09-29
Posts 197Pennsylvania |
Drain me of my blood Seduce me with soulless love Be my vampire |
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JenniferMaxwell
since 2006-09-14
Posts 2423 |
Sorry you don't encourage critique, I would have loved to leave a comment on your poem. Keep writing! |
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Moonkist Member
since 2006-09-29
Posts 197Pennsylvania |
I don't mind critique. I'm still getting used to the site, so in the meantime, please do share and critique my work! Peace, Moonkist |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Hi Moonkist, Welcome to the darker side of passions! Glad to see a new face joining the ranks here I would love to comment also but I think that I will leave that to another day after some more contemplation of your piece, well, to be truthful, after I get a good nights rest. I could distort this in lots of ways on accident the way my brain is fuzzing over... Just wanted to extend a welcome though! I hope you enjoy the site and you find it to be as much of an inspiration as I have. Thanks for sharing your piece, hopefully I'll be back a look again "I pray thee, O God, that I |
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