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The Widow's Walk
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The Widow's Walk |
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lanaia74 Member
since 2006-08-25
Posts 67 |
From here you can hear in the distance The angry ocean hit the rocks at the bottom of the vast cliff I watch the sea as the waves look like they are doing a religious dance As I wait penitently for my love to bring a special gift. Being newlyweds we bought this house by the sea Hoping to fulfill all of our dreams Of the life in front of us, you see All our dreams are coming true it seems. I try to patiently wait as I am alone What happens next, was it worth this place? As I sit outside smelling the salt air I hear a moan Looking at the widow's walk I see a lady all in white lace. She was transparent and surrounded by a white haze Looking as if she is waiting as she looks upon the sea Am I seeing this? I'm truly amazed I'm seeing a spirit and don't want to flee. It's like I see her pain in her stone cold eyes Longing, waiting, and hoping she seems to emit You can feel her sadness as she cries Watching her every move as I sit. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- |
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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
I don't really know what to say...(speechless for once) I love the feeling! Kind of like you painted it only in words. Love it lots!!! |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
You have a way with words that almost mirrors my writing style. I really enjoy reading your stuff. -Juju |
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mged Junior Member
since 2007-03-29
Posts 39ND |
this is so so... moveing i don`t say that much. KEEP ON |
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Cheechako Junior Member
since 2007-04-28
Posts 21Texas |
Hi Lanaia74, How well this describes many of my deepest feelings, fears and desires. Darknes along with light. Impressive. Cheechako |
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