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stevebrklynnyc
Member

since 2004-01-04

Posts 292
GA, Camden

0 posted 2004-12-06 07:28 PM

Different versions force alone
One day is all but gone now
Make way for the fall, or hell
Hopefully heaven will deal with this mess

Uncluttered, all the way to the end
Now ever more, I hope for the reply
Make me free to feel again
Fault is unknown to all passed by

Now I hear voices from inward
Directed at me full force
Work on and be complete
Desire will be no more

Try and try again
Deaf from this perception
Allow no compassion, walls of protection
Give way to isolation
Forgive all, maybe one, never ourselves

Bleak and filled with hate, no empathy within sight
I know not where I fit in
I work now, hardly noticing
Where I once called a home

Strange how we move along
One moment to the next
It’s all to fast
Slow down now, it’s all past

Just a memory
Fleeting at best
Cold blood runs shallow
In icy memories of tomorrow

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

1 posted 2004-12-07 12:37 PM

Sounds raw and somewhat brutal and tough. Its cool.

-GIS

let God ROAR,... in power...

stevebrklynnyc
Member

since 2004-01-04

Posts 292
GA, Camden

2 posted 2004-12-07 04:50 PM

Thanks GIS, just venting!

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

3 posted 2004-12-08 11:22 PM

hehe yeah i could tell it was a vent

loved it
cant pick a favourite bit because it was all so damn good!

awesome work, nice and powerful

love and empathy
sophie

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

Purity
Senior Member

since 2001-11-20

Posts 526
Once Upon, USA

4 posted 2004-12-08 11:45 PM

Touche'...
I agree, vent on!
Great piece!

Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere

stevebrklynnyc
Member

since 2004-01-04

Posts 292
GA, Camden

5 posted 2004-12-11 03:54 PM

I guess we all go through stages. I appreciate all the responses, later, steve.

ladylisa
Member

since 2007-04-29

Posts 342
Florida USA

6 posted 2007-04-29 04:17 PM

It is almost impossible to hear through the silence. I really enjoyed reading this poem, real emotion and real life, thanks.

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