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Dark Poetry #4

Unreflected Life

TwiztidKarma
Junior Member

since 2006-09-22

Posts 43
Florida

0 posted 2006-09-24 08:48 PM

Life is restrained from all gratitude,
I'll cut your body into diagonal latitude,
Dont give me that Third-dimensional attitude.

  I know I am strange,
   I am deranged,
  Looking at my twiztid reflection,
Making your tempature change,
At a simple target range.

     Tainted reality,
   Finds its way to come to me,
  Legaly thought to be
  Critically insane,
  With this new profound wonderful spirituality.

     I seek, I destroy
   Like the delivery boy,
    Helen of troy,
   I found yourself a new big-boy toy,
  As I watch to enjoy,
  Talkin to whats her face,
   Who showed me....
                the finest disgrace.



      Now gone, all laid to a beautiful rest,
    Is this sick torment,
   All just a nauseating test?

            Well anyway,


            I wish for the best,
          Cuz at last I'll be blessed,
         With this ill blue vest,

        So to surpass the depressed,
         I need to be impressed,
        So you unwelcome guest,
          Take a big deep breath,
        For the great eternal rest.

cherrys_rule
Member

since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

1 posted 2006-09-25 11:10 AM

MAn as I read on and on with your poems, I just think that was really really good. MAn I love your poems.
Courney

Triskaidekaphobia
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 251
In a state of disrepair...

2 posted 2006-10-03 11:37 AM

Really great poem. Some really memeorable lines and an unique style. I am putting this in my library.

"The world won't end in darkness, it'll end in family fun
With Coca Cola clouds behind a Big Mac sun."

One God by The Beautiful South

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