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What Have I Become?
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What Have I Become? |
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lanaia74 Member
since 2006-08-25
Posts 67 |
What kind of monster have I let myself become? In the light of day I lead a normal life, but when it becomes night, I become some one else I have killed an immense unbelievable sum The other one, I have no memory of this someone else. From what I know I have a sadistic taste for men Even though I am married and a well respected gent After my sexual acts, I get so enraged with myself, I kill to totally wipe it away, and maybe I won't do this again To my knowledge so many to hell I have sent. I dispose of the bodies under my house These two people live in one body, a struggle always within my mind I never meant to become an awful insane louse I try to be careful, so me they will never find. In my normal life, I even host parties as a happy clown But listen to what I say, for your own good stay away from me Go with me, my son, and your body will never be found I will try and make sure me they will never find. A perfectionist I am, so I use a crawl space to hide my awful secret All memories of what I do remain kind of hazy But men, don't fall prey to me, because I don't hesitate to kill, not one little bit So watch out, all men, don't cross the path of John Wayne Gacy. |
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moonbeam
since 2005-12-24
Posts 2356 |
This is very dark. You might try to remove this inversion though: "I try to be careful, so me they will never find." It sounds a little like Yoda from Star Wars. How about: "I try to be careful, so they will never find me." and also this one: "To my knowledge so many to hell I have sent." becomes: "To my knowledge I have sent so many to hell." Incidentally how do you know they went to hell? Just asking. M |
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