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Ebon (In Rictameter Rhyme)
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Ebon (In Rictameter Rhyme) |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Ebon ~*Marge Tindal*~ ~ebon shadows-in-slide slither 'cross the hillside etch deeply into the landscape seeking escape as twilight escalates cloaks this day in serenity hidden so, just beyond peek-a-boo moon ebon~ ~Sharing another view of the Rictameter structure~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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moonbeam
since 2005-12-24
Posts 2356 |
YAY Marge I love the word Ebon. Nice work. M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Marge, I am just going to have to try one of these. I have the count you left on another thread. This is wonderful dear lady. Love and hugs~Nancy ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EnchantedFriend~ You go for it girlie friend~ I KNOW you can do it ..~  LOVE YOU~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Marge, This is wonderful! My daughter was reading over my shoulder, and she loved it too. It says a great deal when you impress an 11 year old! Sandra |
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JenniferMaxwell
since 2006-09-14
Posts 2423 |
Marge, this is lovely, a perfect description of twilght, my second favorite part of the day. I'm going to try one of these. There's almost a haiku to feel to them and I love good haiku. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sandra~ THANK YOU ... I absolutely LOVE knowing I can draw an 11 year old into the spiral of my ink~ Does she write ??? I'm just gonna bet that if she doesn't ... she will~ Jennifer~ I will sure look forward to reading it~ Have fun with it ... the format lends itself to unique creativity~ DANG .. it's just a GREAT day to be a poetess~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
This is so neat Marge. I love it |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: I love this! It conjures up many images in my mind! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
This is wonderful, Marge! I've never written a rictameter before, but I'd love to try it.  sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... ~Tim McGraw |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Betts & BettyLou~ Thankee gals ... I just knew you both would enjoy this one~ SkyGal~ You give it a go and let me know~ I find the form has such versatility~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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PoetsPlay Member
since 2007-12-22
Posts 56California |
This is really good Marge! Thank you for being my first reviewer! Alexandra |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Alexandra~ Thank you so much for digging for this one~ I greatly enjoyed being your 'first' reviewer~ With the busy Christmas shopping time, the forums may be a little slow in keeping up .. but the poets here will get a good opportunity to read and get to know you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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eternally_singing Member
since 2007-12-18
Posts 123PA, United States |
Thank you for posting this! Never before have I encountered this form of poetry and it really piqued my interest! I love finding new ways of doing things, so I may give the rictameter format a try. I enjoyed your word choices tremendously especially the word ebon. You created such a vivid image through this poem. It was amazing! Thank you again for introducing me to something new.  |
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Tears-of-Sanity Member
since 2007-09-05
Posts 121Kingdom Hearts |
Very nice. Unique I am glad to read a great poem like this.Sorry for not sending anything in a while.. Merry Christmas! Tears of Sanity~ |
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