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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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~questioned the shadows fall consuming the soul so lost beyond all thought of mending wounds undeniably undeniable words fall, ink-stained hands denying the existence of guilt hell-bent intent questioned~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Marge.. Thought I saw your name here in the dark. Sometimes we never receive an answer to the question, and it allows us become bitter. May your questions always be answered.. and your smile always sunny. A most excellent write. Good to read you again. Heart hugs, Nancy  ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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JenniferMaxwell
since 2006-09-14
Posts 2423 |
Sounds like a misunderstanding gone terribly wrong causing a lot of hurt and pain. If you have a chance, could you tell me what the form is, just starting to explore and try a few forms. Thanks so much! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thanks dear MartieSis and Enchantress~ You gals know this heart so well~ Always there for a friend~ Jennifer~ Nice that you would notice that there actually is a 'form' to this one~ It is in the Rictameter format - (usually) if done so-so takes on the shape of a diamond ... however, I intentionally first-drafted this one with ink from the heart ... it is effective for me~ Rictameter - 9 lines of poetry Begins with 2 syllables then 4 syllables then 6 syllables then 8 syllables then 10 syllables then 8 6 4 2 (working the thoughts back down to the same two syllable word you began with~ Thank you for asking ... email me anytime you would like to know anymore about this format~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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JenniferMaxwell
since 2006-09-14
Posts 2423 |
Got it! Thanks, Marge. |
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moonbeam
since 2005-12-24
Posts 2356 |
Marge Very interesting. I'd never come across that form before though I seem to recall Dylan Thomas experimented with all sorts of shapes in poetry, including diamonds. So maybe I saw it without realising it. Thank you. Moonbeam |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jennifer~ Great ! It is an effectively lovely form to work~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Marge, your words move me as always. Take care! |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I like this one alot. -Juju -<>-~-<>-~-<>- |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Appreciate seeing you here, Fast Eddie~  Thanks JuJu~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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