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Fine ?! ( a very old piece of mine)
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Fine ?! ( a very old piece of mine) |
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Tempest Member
since 2006-04-28
Posts 247dont eat paint chips!!!! 
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They said it will be fine, But i cry knowing the truth, That your not mine. You dont know how much I tryed. But still the luminesence lingered in my mind I am broken, shattered, and slain All for the truth of the pain This is not the perfect picture they see This is not me being me This is a act to fool all the rest But inside im dying To be the best The say only god can judge So why do you You are blind To the world in my mind I was scared to journey and find That you were there all around You were the only sight and sound Out of mind At the simple thought of you They said it will be fine But I cry Knowing the truth That your not mine This is the only life you have, so live it to be remembered [This message has been edited by Tempest (09-06-2006 07:31 PM).] |
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nostalgic*pride Member
since 2006-08-23
Posts 122NowhereVille |
I really enjoyed reading this. Not much else to say... nothing to be changed or altered... |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
not my fav from you but you are still an awesome poet... hunnie*  p.s you should post on the teen poetry site too. A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~ |
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