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Shaddow1
Junior Member

since 2006-09-04

Posts 41
Kingman Az, USA

0 posted 2006-09-04 03:31 PM

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walking in the shadows
nothing left to fear
rapist in every corner
i meet them almost every year
i close my eyes
and her my scream
cant wait until its over
so i can wipe away my tearing stream
i lie awake after
and wish they would let me be
i take a scalding shower
to wash away the dirt u cant see
no matter what i cant come clean
so many time has it happend to me
no longer do i fear
no, now i just lie therwishing to be free

Alone

she sits in the dark room
nothing here but gloom
trapt in side her head
face painted red
clawing at her face
trying to win the never ending race
her mind wants out
but she cant scream or shout
she is lost in her mind
searching 4 a door she cant find
docters say she wont come through
that there is nothing left they can do
so there she sits in the dark room
the grim reaper will come for here soon
clawing at her wrists and face
she used to have such beauty and grace
now she is lost inside herself with no way out
her loved ones dont really seem to care about
her insanity thats come to be
she used to be loved so faithfully
now the grim reaper has come to take her away
and bring her to a new place to stay
the docters come and find her body
from the bites and scratches they know she has been noddy
forgoton long ago they take her to an unmarked plot
never to be remembered, her carcus left to rot

(sorry about the spelling and punctuation i was in a hurry to type it all)

Love is like a Rose; it always dies - Britney Miller

cherrys_rule
Member

since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

1 posted 2006-09-04 05:04 PM

I like them both. Very sad but excellent. Good job. I hope to see more in the future.
~Courtney~

SATURN
Member

since 2004-05-04

Posts 78
ok,us

2 posted 2006-09-04 05:24 PM

i to loved them both i can relate to the second one more i hope to see more

~SATURN~

Shaddow1
Junior Member

since 2006-09-04

Posts 41
Kingman Az, USA

3 posted 2006-09-04 08:57 PM

thanks you for the comment and I really do type better then tht but I was trying to type fast so I could go feed my son :P

Love is like a Rose; it always dies - Britney Miller

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