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dq_simone New Member
since 2006-08-22
Posts 4Calif., US |
WordsWardsPrisonsofwordsPrisonerofwardsPrisoner BarsBarForeverupForeverdownNeveracrossNoneverNo NostarsformeNotopNobottomJustbusybeingaprisoner AprisonerofwordsWordsForwordsGoingforwardsWords NotstoppablewordsFlowingwordsScreamingbackwords |
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Sorrow Member
since 2006-06-14
Posts 83Ireland |
wow I think i've gone blind trying to read that! Even though there was no structure I think I understood what you were trying to say. We are all prisoners of words and the rule our lives and control our expressions. |
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burntsiena Junior Member
since 2006-08-10
Posts 34Rhode Island |
Good use of the structure of poem to show what you want to show - at the same time I wonder if the coherence of phrases within the poem in some way detracts from the poem's aim - or perhaps it shows that without structure you can still pick out some semblance of intelligible thought - as much as words trap you, you can still understand them - either way this is very creative and I enjoyed being able to see this poem - thanks! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Extremely creative, and I especially liked that...a little hard on the eyes, but you kept the tempo short and sweet. TD |
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shatteredsilver Member
since 2005-03-31
Posts 63middle of nowhere |
Reminds me a bit of the form of my rant/rambles. Enjoyed |
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