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droppinginsideout
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since 2006-08-04
Posts 54
TENN

0 posted 2006-08-11 04:03 AM


its funny, it doesnt hurt anymore.
its not numb cuz i still feel things,
things pulling back but at the same time
building.
the initial shock was the worst
but i have a feeling its only goin to get worse
in a spasm i feel it doing what it does
and now im uneven, off-balanced...
out of tune?
i cant put my finger on it but its there,
Atrophy.
always building while its lacking substance.
ha, now it hurts, not physically
but mentally
im drained.

my life: the epitomy of atrophy

~Jamison~    "feeling sorrow for all the things u had to steal and borrow, bring back the dates we had b4 tomorrow"-red jumpsuit apparatus

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green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
1 posted 2006-08-11 07:55 PM


I saw a movie called atrophy once and I though of it as rad then, but I don't remember it...  Yeah nice write.  

In Christ,
-Craig

To wrestle is to live; to fight is to love.

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