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lace_of_light Junior Member
since 2006-08-02
Posts 44 |
Such a horrid beauty this life Toying with people through happiness and strife Not allowing that I should smile That maybe joy would grace me for a while No, that's too much to ask In the cold darkness I bask Pale and gray, lips dyed red The scent of death strong, for I bled Lying across this cracked expansion A cursed and wretched creation I am chained down by my sins There resides nothing but cold within Tears of blood I so beautifully cry As above me shatters the night sky The shards fall and pierce my skin They lacerate my body over and over again Just when I think the worst has passed This horrid life makes the suffering last No warm hand to touch my cheek No warm face for me to seek Alone, I grow cold As I never grow decrepit or old Black blood trickles down my face My throat bleeds, this I taste Supreme emptiness consumes Complete vapidity resumes Lifeless, I live on forever Loveless, pain holds me closer ever To my nature, this is wrong To hurt and die for so long Why won't my tribulation end? It never does on this you can depend The love is lost, but luckily pain comes free As the hate drowns me I died under the desert sands I died by your hands My life forever eternal As you kill me I become preternatural As you kill me My happiness dies, not me "areyouinorareyouout? eitherwayyoucan'twin." he said. "butthefallwillbefantasticandwhat'sleftisnothinglessthanperfection" |
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Digital_Hell Member
since 2006-06-05
Posts 202Amidst black roses |
Again an absolutely beautifull write. It is dark and i love every word of it. i can relate to this on such a deep level. It feels as if you have taken my emotions and described them in perfect detail. you are an extremely good writer. "Tears of blood I so beautifully cry As above me shatters the night sky" I loved this! and this "No warm hand to touch my cheek No warm face for me to seek" actually im in love with the whole poem. The list just goes on and on. the imagery and emotions are so beautifull. Please keep up this amazing work, i cant wait to read more! A sign in the wind |
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