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Dark Poetry #4

change of inside

zigwield
Member

since 2006-06-25

Posts 61

0 posted 2006-07-21 01:26 PM

the more the nights pass
the more i try to clear
my thoughts from my mind
those of 'no good'

fear is embracing me
but i trully feel
for the first time
better feelings

like a change in the inside

its the times we start to turn ourselves
to the basics of our faith
and yes it is the judgement
quite strict and heavy

sorry to the people i hurt
past is past
i cannot change the facts
i feel sorry for these
but these make me who i am

i start to realise day by day
that i have to be more and more postive
it is very hard but we have to believe
in ourselves

(sorry Nk for today's bad thoughts
i know s×times i'm a real j#rk
that's about me
i'll fix it if i can

)

Venus1974
Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 79
Tennessee, USA

1 posted 2006-07-24 01:25 AM

The first step to change is admitting your faults good write

Peace and happiness to us all, Venus

the quell
Member

since 2006-07-19

Posts 144
Liverpool, UK

2 posted 2006-07-24 08:22 AM

Lovely; and all very true. A really honest, beautiful piece. I'm impressed

Where black, bleeding roses await the Thirteen,
I see not the stars, but the darkness between

trUstNooNe
Member

since 2006-05-21

Posts 91

3 posted 2006-07-24 11:04 PM

i agree i think we should all be postive. and you deff. dont get any where in life with out believeing in your self...nice write...i like it alot!

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

4 posted 2006-07-25 04:33 PM

I loved this piece! It shows me how many ways I need to change, change parts of my life, my feelings, lots of things...

It was a nice reminder that I'm not perfect, yet, I can still strive to be!

Thanks for sharing

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Philmont
Member

since 2004-01-10

Posts 61

5 posted 2006-07-25 09:47 PM

Yes, believe in yourself because no one will do that for you.

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