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zigwield
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since 2006-06-25
Posts 61


0 posted 2006-07-19 09:11 AM



Please try to give me
the answers i need
i do not hate
i feel the love

and yes i see you
more and more in my dreams
but now you are always sad

we still have till the 31st
that i know
please remind me

of the promises we gave
from the cradle to the grave

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the quell
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since 2006-07-19
Posts 144
Liverpool, UK
1 posted 2006-07-19 09:24 AM


I liked it; very sweet
Bobomo
Junior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 35

2 posted 2006-07-19 05:20 PM


The inevitable departure of a loved one and the bitter-sweet joy of the final days.
trUstNooNe
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since 2006-05-21
Posts 91

3 posted 2006-07-22 07:58 AM


intersing,keep me thinking though..i like it,
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