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Now It starts To Get Frique and Fast
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Now It starts To Get Frique and Fast |
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zigwield Member
since 2006-06-25
Posts 61 |
Like the night is endless four questions and two towers to be answered and to be rebuilt once again but remember this yet it is only the start we have a lot to see life is good life is beatifull life is full of fun life is full of love! |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Well, I don’t really understand the title to this, and I’m very dense it’s probably something very obvious, but I did like the poem. It was a nice reminder of life, yet, it’s not always beautiful and good… At first I felt like this poem was kind of serious, somber, it made questions, made you think, but when it came to the “life is good” stanza it kind of took on a lighter tone for me. It was different, I’m here feeling warring emotions on this, in one instance I want to laugh, no offence if that wasn’t your idea behind the poem, and in the next I’m sad, thinking. It’s confusing. Yet, I loved this poem because it makes me feel like this, I like something that will hold my attention as well as this did. Thanks so much for sharing, this was a great poem on your part  @-->--- |
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zigwield Member
since 2006-06-25
Posts 61 |
it the sense of not what realy life is but the sense of what you need to say ... or something like this... |
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the quell Member
since 2006-07-19
Posts 144Liverpool, UK |
Very good; you managed to somehow convey a lot with just a few simple words. A sort of minimalistic approach I really wish I could master! Where black, bleeding roses await the Thirteen, |
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Venus1974 Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 79Tennessee, USA |
It does make u think...thanx for sharing  Peace and happiness to us all, Venus |
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