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rockbabe Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 105 |
Need to be alone Need to be silent Need to find……. Try to make sense Going it alone The only way To put an end to the voices Fighting demons, Fighting you What’s real?? What’s my imagination?? The biggest fear Will I be able to deal with what’s real? Or.... do I just live in denial? |
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Alone in the dark Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 105On the edge of an abyss |
I don't know why knowbody responded to this yet! This is what I feel. I write about feeling like this too, but I haven't posted it yet. Maybe I was scared people would go "huh"? But I can relate to this well. Great job!  ^*^Angel^*^  |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Omgosh! I so understand this feeling. I really liked how you phrased it though, I can never write about what I am really and truly thinking. Yet, I always see people who write about what I’m feeling and I’m awe struck! I think you captured the emotions in this poem just right. This is an amazing poem. I liked how you set it up, I think that it adds more to the poem in that format. Great job on this, I’d love to see more  @-->--- |
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