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Dark Poetry #4

Silence

rockbabe
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 105

0 posted 2006-06-25 11:52 AM

Heart filled with words
Screams, pounding from within

The need to be heard
Yet, permanently silenced

Mutilated,
With every act unable to speak

Words banished from my mind,
Now imprinted in my heart

Emotions flowing,
Yet never reaching its vocal point

Wanting,
Needing,

To speak freely!

Digital_Hell
Member

since 2006-06-05

Posts 202
Amidst black roses

1 posted 2006-06-25 02:48 PM

its nice. its sadly truthfull. too often are we afraid to speak our minds and suffer in silence. very enjoyable. look forward to reading more!

hells gate reads Abandon hope all ye that enter here
shall we go?
the road to hell is paved with good intentions.
Will you walk with me?

ChaoticHazeLight
Member

since 2006-06-13

Posts 71
California, U.S.

2 posted 2006-06-26 12:21 PM

... so true

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

3 posted 2006-06-26 09:46 AM

It's a very sad poem for me to read... This is also another poem that reminds me of things I should be doing but I'm not.

"Heart filled with words
Screams, pounding from within

The need to be heard
Yet, permanently silenced

Mutilated,
With every act unable to speak "

I loved this part, the words in it described the whole thing just right, it brought a clear image into my mind. I think that you found a way to capture the emotions in this poem perfectly, made everyone stop and think... or at least i did.

Great job on this one, I can't wait to see more of yours

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rockbabe
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 105

4 posted 2006-06-27 06:21 AM

Thanks for your comments!!!!!

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