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SATURN
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ok,us
0 posted 2006-06-23 02:21 AM


Lost Dreams are like walking shadows.
moving here and there changing with the sun
and decaying with the night. Lost Dreams sway when the wind blows and melts with the rain. Lost Dreams are gone but never forgotten.

SATURN
JUNE 22, 06
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Sorrow
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Ireland
1 posted 2006-06-23 09:24 AM

Short and sweet. It's good, I like the imagery and the way you describe the lost dreams.
rockbabe
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since 2006-01-29
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2 posted 2006-06-25 05:36 AM

Short, but yet it has a message,
Nice!!
SATURN
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ok,us
3 posted 2006-08-16 01:42 AM

i havn't been on in a while but thank you. i just write what comes to mind.
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