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A simple no
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A simple no |
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Digital_Hell Member
since 2006-06-05
Posts 202Amidst black roses |
And so the final word is spoken a pathetic mockery this farewell token. To you i bared my soul, you looked at it, and spat it out whole. Opening up for the fist time, i hoped for an answer sweet as wine. Now the night echoes with my empty screams staring in torment at my broken dreams a simple answer would have been kind instead now the pieces of my heart i must find Why did you have to tear out my Soul? Hard as rock,Cold as ice a simple no would suffice cynical or maybe just wise? discerning? realistic?... |
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Internalexile Junior Member
since 2006-06-15
Posts 38UK |
Wow, that was excellent! "To you i bared my soul, you looked at it, and spat it out whole." I particulaly liked this part, as many times I have opened up to people only to be hurt. Great Write  Internalexile Let the moonlight paint your face, let the stars be your cloak... |
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Sorrow Member
since 2006-06-14
Posts 83Ireland |
It's amazing how a lot of our poems echo each others. It sort of shows we're not alone. Everybody feels pain and doubt. This poem just reminded me of that. |
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