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The Scream of my Heart
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The Scream of my Heart |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan 
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The Scream of my Heart 06/06/06 As the walls press in and the noise crashes down I push at the barriers and try to break free, free of my mind and it's intermost thoughts but mostly it's from the fear of myself And the odd thing about it is the enemy in me brandishing her sword and wrenching my gut with the blood of another and saying it's mine, the fault for the world and it's tyrannous corruptions So as I collapse to the hole of my obscurity a soft muffled sob ruptures the clods, the dirt packed bars of the bain of my existence that force me down at the drop of a hat Crushing my heart it displaces my breath pushing the fear of rejection inside burrowing into my cavity of relief it disrupts and freezes the blood in my veins Thus causing my soul to freeze over and crack and just by the slash of the knife to my back the lights start to dim as the sirens blare through just when I black out to the sound of a scream |
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Digital_Hell Member
since 2006-06-05
Posts 202Amidst black roses |
very touching. it delves into what so many of us feel. the rejection, the loneliness. the dark mosnster inside of us! i really like it. keep up the good work. look forward to hearing more of your work |
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trUstNooNe Member
since 2006-05-21
Posts 91 |
wow..you really put passion into it..like it alot.*. |
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Alone in the dark Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 105On the edge of an abyss |
This is such an emotional and heartbreaking description of the feelings that many of us share, but were unable to find the words to explain. *Angel* |
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